Gotcha. The link text that you included didn’t work for me. The share link request only applies to ConvertKit :) (…and I only asked about ConvertKit because they are running a landing page challenge right now so a lot of people are chatting with me about their pages for the challenge. I thought you might be one of them.)

As all I can see is the few lines of copy that you’ve pastes into your comment I’ll evaluate that.

Learn the 5 CORE REASONS Writers Fail … and the FAILURE REVERSAL SYSTEM that Guarantees Success

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The main advice I have for you is to focus on what your audience cares about, not what you care about. You care about the 5 core reasons and the failure reversal system—the two things you have come up with. They care more about the failing and success parts.

Applying the basic story structure we teach in the mini-course you have access to now and rewriting the copy to focus on what your audience cares about might look something like this:

There are 5 core reasons writers fail
In this guide I’ll show you all five so that you can avoid them.
Then I’ll show you the Failure Reversal System that guarantees success!

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I’m sure you could write something much better, but hopefully this gets your wheels turning.